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Review:Jchrissy says:
Okay, now that the next chapter is up I am prepared to leave a review ;).

First of all, I was SO annoyed that she didn't just tell him it was her cousin!! PS - I'm horrible at remembering whose next gen belongs to who, so if I ever call them cousin/brother I apologize ;).

Anyway - this chapter had some serious sexual tension. Not even just the ending, it felt like a game from the start. I am just as frustrated as Rose with Viktor refusing to really open up, and I was totally along the same lines as her with the - he must've had an unstable childhood, thoughts. Haha!

I am very curious as to how he is getting this book information, and can I think I may need a cold glass of water! ;)

I really love the progress this has made, it's enough to feel natural but not too slow, nor did I feel like you threw me in the middle of a relationship that made no sense.

And no, my patience is gone and I need to read on!

Author's Response: This, I will admit, was a fun chapter to write. I felt the same way about the whole "it being a game" idea. Krum enjoys teasing her, no question about it. What Rose just won't admit to herself until the very end is that she enjoys the chase almost as much as he does. And I'm glad the sexual tension worked/came through. I've never actually written romance before so this is all new territory for me. I was aiming to not be cheesy, so hopefully I came close to the mark.

The bits about how he knows about the book, who Albus is, and a small taste of Krum's childhood will all be addressed in Chapter 12...along with a few other questions I've been carrying along for a while. Hopefully the answers live up to the wait!

Thank you again and again and again!

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