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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Ahh, I love fluff! & you did a really nice job with it (: I can't believe you've never written it before! :O

I really liked all of your characters and would definitely like to see more of them! I hope you do write some more one-shots about these characters, I think it could be very interesting(:

One thing I can suggest for this story is maybe add a little more description. Like, what year are they all in? What do Mia, Roxanne, James and Louis look like? These were some of the things I was curious about and I'm sure you'd be able to add in something about it in this story or possibly in future ones(: Other than those little things, I thought this was great! Really nice job & I hope you do well in the challenge!

-Amanda

Author's Response: I love fluff too, I just always worry about how it will come out when I write it.

I definitely will be writing more about these characters (I have at least two more plots in my head) but I'm trying to finish my novella up first so I don't feel so guilty. I only have 1.5 chapters left to write of it though, so hopefully soon.

Ahh, yes. I'm glad you said that, because it really is quite helpful. I'm usually VERY description heavy, but I wasn't quite sure how to make it fit in this story, or how to give character descriptions without being obnoxious. I'll have to look and see where I can put some in. I did try and get some subtle description of James in though. Tall, broad? Hahaha, very general, I know.

Thanks for reviewing!

~Cassie


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