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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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So you definitely made every word count here. You obviously couldn't go into too much detail or background with the word limit, but it managed to capture the essence of what is clearly a very complex and extremely unhealthy relationship.

Marlene's emotional conflict came accross very well, and we can see the turmoil of how she knows they shouldn't be together, but is somehow more attracted to him because she knows it's wrong. Travers meanwhile seems very controling and posseive, which is pretty much exactly how I would picture a future death eater in this situation.

Great use of the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to review! I’m glad you noticed that. Their relationship is really complex and there were many issues lurking beneath the surface that I just touched upon. And he did end up killing her. Many women and girls in real life experienced the same but what they don’t take in account that this is perhaps more dangerous than they thought. In her case she ended up death.

Thank you


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