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Review:Noelle says:
I really like it so far... the last few paragraphs didn't quite make sense, but i guess you want it to have that mysterious feel... I think i just got confused because you skipped from Harry sitting down to a girl writing a letter...anyway i hope that chapter five is the last chapter in the story and that you didn't choose to stop writing it because i really am loving the story so far!!! Also, Never give up writing something you love! I myself don't usually comment when i read fanfics so maybe people ARE reading but not commenting...Great work so far and I can't wait to see what happens

Author's Response: Sorry for any confusion, I normaly leave more than one line when I'm changing scenes or something - I wrote this chapter on my iPad, probably not the best idea. It is meant to have that mysterious feel as you mentioned. I'm glad you liked it, and thank you, I will keep writing this story and if people like it great. I hope you carry on reading!! Thanks for the advice and commenting :D

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