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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

I'm back! Surprise! I'm sorry that it took a minute for me to get back to you, I've been really busy with boring adult stuff and actually started typing again myself. :p
I'm out of the groove with my characters and it sucks!
Anyway! We're back with Pansy again of course and I was able to gather that she isn't quite having the easiest time in the Archives, making friends that is. I thought it was very odd and a little funny that she had decided to make notes on all of her co-workers so that she could somehow fit in. You could really see how awkward she was with bridging the gaps with other people and I'm really interested to see how she develops farther in her studies. Theresa was a surprise for me because I didn't think that she would be the person that Pansy would even talk to first, being so outlandish and all. For whatever reason, I expected her to talk to Felicity more but perhaps that's something that will happen in the near future? And Bennett returned! I was excited and so wrapped up in Pansy's brooding that I nearly forgot about him but while he was there, I was a bit wary on what he really wanted. He was asking alot of questions about Pansy, as if she were something in a story that he hadn't quite figured out yet. I'm almost certain that he means her no harm but at the same time I can't help but hope that Pansy stays suspicious of his motives, at least for now. You can never be too careful with charming reporters that ask about your precious pugs you know! :D
She wasn't exactly falling for his charm though, I can say that I was proud of her but I really can't wait to see how their relationship (?) develops and what she'll eventually file down for him. I have a feeling that his note might be rather confusing and long and she'll spend quite a bit of time on it! Hahah. Will we be seeing him again soon? :D
I saw in your A/N that you were working on another story! Hm.I shall have to get on that! AND! I left you some pestering questions on your MTA, feel free to answer those whenever you have the time!
Much love,

Author's Response: Hey! It's great to see your review! Sorry it's taken me so long to respond- I've been bogged down with work. And congrats on getting back into writing! It is fun, isn't it? :)

No, Pansy isn't having the easiest time of it in the Archives. Her co-workers are very different from the types of people she's used to associating with and of course she has to be very careful in how she interacts with them. She's having difficulty understanding them and that's where the notes come in (which I agree are a strange way of starting friendships but then again Pansy isn't exactly normal...).

Felicity may or may not play a larger role in the future- I haven't quite decided that. Some of the things in this story seem to write themselves, though I do know where I'm going to end up.

Yes, Adri's back and he's asking a lot of questions! You'll continue to see him in future chapters and Pansy's reactions to him... Their relationship (if that's what you want to call it) definitely will change and develop. (I won't say more on that topic!). But yes, you can never be too careful about reporters who ask about your pugs!

I look forward to seeing your reviews for my other story, if you get a chance to look at it. It's a lot shorter than this story is and mostly written. I'll pop over and answer your questions as soon as I have time- thank you so much for leaving them! Questions are so much fun to answer!

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