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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
Wow. One of the first one shots that I've ever read about the relationship between James and Al and I really really enjoyed it. I love the spin you put on it, it makes you feel all warm inside when you read the parts where James helps Al overcome his fear and learn to enjoy flying. Normally James is teasing Al or pulling pranks on him but in this fix, that side of James took a back seat and I think we got to see what James's core character is. I didn't think the romance side was strictly necessary as you pretty much sold the relationship to me without even having to go into humongous detail but it was a nice touch. Really adored this fix, I hope you write lots more in future.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this amazing review :) I don't even know how to start responding lol. I'm so glad you liked it! James usually is characterized as always pulling pranks and what not, and while I can totally see that side of him, I love to think that James is very caring, especially when it comes to his family.

The flashback with Chloe was actually a really last minute addition--I'd only planned on mentioning her name but I'm glad it didn't take away from the plot! Thank you so much again for taking the time to read and review! :D

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