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Review:Cleopatraa says:
So Iíve seen that this story had been nominated in the Dobby Ďs and thatís why I decided to check this out.

She saw them through the large front room window, casting the spells around her house, making it impossible for him to apparte.

I think you made a mistake here ( apparte). But next to that I think you did well. You portrayed the things that were going one with Astoria well. Even though she was a victim she had a hidden strength. Glad you made her complex character with depth and problems. I liked the connection between Astoria and Draco, especially considering the fact they got married in canon. The story wasnít my cup of tea but even though it wasnít my thing I could see you wrote it well ( characterization, description and such)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Child abuse definitely isn't everyone's cup of tea and I'm so happy you told me that as opposed to just CCing things because you didn't like them.

Thanks again for stopping by and your wonderful compliments.

Jami


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