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Review:seekers_destiny says:
I got the George/Izzy I was anticipating but it wasn't quite what I expected. However, that isn't bad at all as I really enjoyed it. It was nice that the younger of the two finally broke them out of the pattern they'd fallen into. I'm not worried about them falling out of contact as they both still have the means to communicate. They just won't have the in-person time they want for a while. That's the down side to the Fidelus Charm.

Izzy was a bit like her mother there but she is the teenager of the two so I won't criticize that part. I liked Sirius using his animagus form to keep watch/tip them off that help was there. The 'liquid luck' worked as them splitting up was part of them getting away. Apparently Ginny listened better than Izzy since she was safe first (or at least it appeared that way). It may also be that they didn't go for their plan B (Ginny) as part of their plan A was still in play (Izzy) and as far as the other DEs knew, they already had Mia. I also liked how Ginny was watching out for her friend before they made their break for it.

Author's Response: Sorry for the late reply!
It was time either Izzy or George out it all out there, even if it wasn't verbally - that might have made things a little easier because I wouldn't be too sure about them being able to remain in contact...
The Felix did its job this time but Mia won't be too happy with it next chapter even though she doesn't really remember the escape.
I always saw Ginny as the king of person who can keep her mind clear during very stressing times. Izzy may take a page out of her book in a future chapter (mostly out of desperation) but this one before being rescued she was a bit of a chicken running around with its head cut off. Though she acted like Mia did in the previous chapter, you'll see it's Sirius she really takes after - who's the one who jumps into things without caring about the outcome? Ginny knew that and acted accordingly.
Chapter 62 is already posted - it will address some issues you'd pointed out last chapter :D

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