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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I thought that this was a very good beginning chapter. With just reading this chapter, I'm not sure what it was that had caused James and co to become animals when they didn't know for sure that Remus was a werewolf though it does seem plausable but still a bit confusing so I do hope that gets explained in future chapters. I found a small spelling mistake here, "the irritability at evertything they said" in this you've added an extra t in everything. So far, I think you have a good idea for a story and I do look forward to reading more and seeing how this shall all come out to play. I hope that Remus doesn't become the killer that the animal inside him wants to be. I think its nice to see the friendship between the four boys as they had such a huge and trusting friendship and its just so wonderful to see. Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed the beginning of this! Thanks for pointing out the typo. I went ahead and fixed it. Ugh, tiny mistakes like that will be the death of me! Hahaha! Remus does come close a couple of times and while he laughed about it when he was young, it was something that always haunted him when he grew older. The many "what ifs", you know. Friendship and pack is what's behind this story.

Thanks for the review! :D

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