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Review:Jchrissy says:
Bahhh you just love to play with my head! That big bold END OF PART 1. I have to say, you're a lucky woman that the next few chapters are posted...

So! I am thrilled to know you majored in criminal justice. Most people would gloss over the actual details of when he got arrested what his son/lawyer was doing about it, what could potentially happen.. all that. I love that you used the muggle system mixed with the wizarding world. And even happier about your degree, because it means I don't have to be completely jealous of how realistic your writing is when it comes to the legal aspects of this. Jealous of course, because your writing in itself is amazing, but not completely ;).

And Krum... Krum Krum Krum. If it were anyone else I'd think they were just faking their obvious nonchalant attitude, but I really don't think he is. And I can't help but wondering if he's going to end up elaborating on the 'there are worse things than Azkaban statement.' I also kind of have a crush on him.. I find myself really wanting to root for these two despite the scandal, his horrible circumstances, I feel like she could help make him better, maybe he could help make her life not so stressful (or, way more stressful if he keeps getting arrested). And she could writer an amazing book about him..

I'm going off on tangents, I just love how much you've made me care for these characters and their very different/original circumstances.

I also love the way that I could *feel* that Rose really, really wanted that book. It wasn't just about her boss/being a good person and trying to help anymore, it was that serious desire to create something about Krum that everyone can read.. Whether it was because she was starting to feel for him, and wanted to dig deeper into him to find out more, or because she wanted to use her skills to possibly change the worlds opinion on him... OR she just had that 'clicking' kind of feeling that it was right... I'm not sure. I'm just super excited that she actually *wants to* now.

ALSO! Very curious as to how (Krum) found out. I hope this review didn't feel too chaotic, I just kept remembering things I wanted to comment on during my second read through!!!

Can't wait to read the next chapter ♥

Author's Response: Yea! Another wonderful review from you. I'm too lucky!

See, I knew all those degrees would be of some use one day. Throwing people in jail has actually become an accidental theme for me, it seems. I suppose I could have tried to create some sort of elaborate wizarding legal system but I think it would have stood at as odd in scope of the story. I hope it worked okay as a hybrid of sorts.

I'm so glad you're liking them as a pair/potential couple. I've really tried to ease into the romance, to make it more palatable for people, sneaking it is a scene at a time. And, ah, Krum. I am shooting for a "confidence is sexy" vibe with him. I hope that's what is coming through!

I'm really excited for what you said about Rose. That's exactly what she's feeling. She doesn't yet know *why* she wants to write the book, but all those ideas have occurred to her, so I'm so glad you picked up on that.

As to how Krum knew about the book, he'll finally come clean with her in chapter 12.

Thank you so, so much for continuing to review. I hope you are enjoying the story!


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