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Review:megthechef43 says:

This is definantly different from the norm on this site. That is not a bad thing though. Sometimes it can be a little monotonous to read the same thing over and over. I didn't notice your English being bad in this chapter. I think you did a good job getting your thoughts across to your readers.

Mel is an interesting character. She is confident and strong willed. She has zip and attitude that is fun to read. I think she could be a fun character to write about and have fun with. I like that you introduced everyone in this chapter.

I hope you re-request.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: thanks a lot for the review :) I'm trying to make it more enjoyable in the next chapters. And i really love Mel too. First i create her like me but then she became much cooler than me :D Thank you so much reviewing, hope you keep on reading and reviewing :)
-Melis :)

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