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Review:megthechef43 says:
No_oneKnows,

I love this first chapter! I think it is funny and flowed well. I think the characterization was spot on.

I think you have nailed James' character prefectly. He is smart and fun-loving and a bit more level-headed than his good buddy Sirius.

Sirius was great too. I think the way he handled the situation was prefect too. I could see him getting a little carried away with himself and getting in a fight with a muggle girl. I laughed out loud when she attacked him.

I think Maia is an interesting character but she needs a close encounter to realize that they are there for her benefit and not just for "looks". :)

This is definantly an interesting story and I hope you continue. I think you did a great job finishing this chapter so that it leaves the reader wanting more.

Good job!

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: Hey Meg!

I love writing the Marauders and as a result, I think I have a set personality for each of them. Something I'm trying to change though :s I feel like I'm being too narrow minded when it comes to them :P

I'm glad you like Maia and she goes through quite a lot to realise that they are actually there to protect her.

Thanks for taking the time to review! :D

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