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Review:megthechef43 says:
BrightStar,

I did enjoy reading this entry in your collection of short stories. I liked the ending and how he could change his own life.

I could definantly see how Fred II could feel that way. How he could feel pushed into being someone that he isn't and replace someone he never knew. It is BIG shoes to fill and especially if Fred II isn't interested in being a joke. My heart broke for George when Fred II refused the jokes to play on the family. Fred and George were so close and it would be just like losing your other half but it should be Fred II spot to fill either. Anyway, I really think this chapter did justice to Fred II and how he would really feel.

Now on to the technical stuffs. :)

I did notice a few grammar/typo issues but they were not a big deal. If you take a few minutes to read through the chapter I'm sure you spot them.

I really liked reading about Anna. You did a great job describing her because I could picture her perfectly.

I think this was a good, strong chapter and if you are rusty (your wording not mine :) ) I didn't notice at all.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: Hi!

Thanks for this! Really helpful to hear praise and critique - I'll have another read through and edit at a later stage!

Thanks Meg!

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