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Review:Marzipan says:
Hey there, back again for more reviewing!

Maybe its just because I don't read Regulus' POV often, but I find I'm really enjoying his chapters! You are doing such an amazing job of creating such a multi-faceted character. He's got such a dark side to him, which is all the more frightening because it is so unthinking. But at the same time your Regulus is someone I really want to like. The scene where Regulus finds out about the attack on the hospital is an excellent example of this: his cavalier attitude about the hospital being targeted, and the fact that one of his school mates was involved is a bit chilling. Yet he does show remorse at the patients also being attacked. And then there is his use of the word Mudblood - I honestly have no idea where you are going to take his character, and I really love that uncertainty!

Another fantastic chapter! Can't wait for more :D

Mary

Author's Response: Hello again!

People seem to enjoy reading things from Regulus's perspective, at least so far in this story :) I do think he's interesting to explore, since he can sometimes be a bit underloved. His naivety could certainly be construed as a kind of darkness, in that he could be really dangerous especially if he's not thinking. I hate the callous way he throws around comments about blood status, in particular.

However, as you mentioned, I do like trying to explore a more likeable side of him, especially in that scene with the other Slytherin boys and the attack on St. Mungo's. He's still young and he has enough sense to know when something doesn't feel right. Unfortunately, his upbringing might make it tough for him to actually translate that into action later on.

Thanks for another fantastic review :)

-Amanda

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