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Review:daretodream says:
*waves*

So, I loved this chapter just as much I loved the last, honestly. You have a magnificent and completely entrancing story on your hands here.

I still love your Regulus, and how dignified he seemingly is in everything that he does. But I think that this chapter really illuminated your Gilderoy for me.

The parts about him being jealous of all of the things that the others had resonated most for me, I think. It's such a true emotion for so many, but not all go on to actually accomplish their goal of having the the things that they always used to be denied. Gilderoy promises himself that someday he will have those gloves in every hue, and the reader knows that it's entirely possible. It helps to reveal a facet to his character, the reasoning behind how vain he is, how determined he is to have lasting fame, even if it means lying and cheating to achieve it.

And him waiting for Regulus, how heartbreaking that it. I feel like he is so desperately craving his attention, and he never gets enough of it, does he? And that need for attention, for love, it never does go away. Especially since it was never fulfilled.

I think my favorite part of this chapter was the part about how Regulus was dead. It was written so poignantly. Regulus is dead, and like Gilderoy knows, he didn't mean anything much to most people. But to Gilderoy, he had been everything, so important. But no one else will ever see him that way, will they? They'll never see his accomplishments, the things that he did towards the end that redeemed his character in ways that no one will ever know. And that's one of the greatest tragedies of his characters in canon if you ask me. He'll never be recognized for the good that he's done.

As you can hopefully tell, I really really enjoyed this chapter as well. You've done a magnificent job so far with this piece!

10/10

~Cassie

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