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Review:kjp says:
yay! another amazing chapter. So far i'd say Cat was my favorite character, she's hilarious to read about. Sometimes its a bit confusing to knowing who is who, I get confused between cat and kiwi.. but that's probably just because i'm really dumb so i wouldn't worry too much.
The plot so far is going really well and your style of writing makes me jealous, i have no idea who you write so fluently and easily. Your plot with the whole pregnancy is good, although when I found out that they'd had sex I guessed it would happen so it wasn't that much of a surprise.
No grammar, spelling or punctuation problems as far as i can tell and i'm coming back to stalk this story soon and there better be a update! :D
- kjp and a 10/10 from me

Author's Response: 10/10 FOR you as well, your reviews make me smile from ear to ear every time!

Cat and Kiwi are easy to confuse as they're pretty similar, so no you're not (too) dumb :P

Yeah, I was surprised nobody said anything at the end of the last chapter: I was sure there would be at least one person to scream "She's pregnant, isn't she?!". But no. So hopefully it was a bit of a surprise?

I'm glad to know you'll be back :) Too many compliments, I don't know what else to say!

*swoons like a fool*

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