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Review:IceCubism says:
Ah, well. Everything was going so well. And now the drama arrives. I have these ominous feelings about:

1. how Ron and Hermione will feel after Lav's lie is exposed (like how the baby is NOT Ron's)

2. who on earth was that mystery girl everyone forgot in the earlier chapters - you know, that one who threatened Draco with a photograph? I'm so afraid of what she will do... I have this really bad feeling that it might just tear apart Hermione and Draco

And I CANNOT BELIEVE LAVENDER. Just when Mrs Weasley was going to accept her for the baby's sake, she just... Ugh, there's no word for it. She was way too rude to Mrs Weasley and I hope Mrs Weasley gets back at Lav after everyone finds out that the baby isn't Ron's. I still haven't forgotten Molly's bad-ass side (remember "Not my son, you bit**"?). Hope she teaches Lav a lesson.

Okay, this was a great chapter with really obvious hints and shows Lav's horrible true colours. I can't wait to read on! :)

10/10

xoxo IceCubism

Author's Response: Drama, drama. I just can not stay away from it! Lol I love writing it! Lol I'm pretty addicted, I think.

1. I can't say about who the baby's father is. I want to. Desperately. Lol But, there will be a pretty big fall out regarding that baby.

2. The girl with the photograph is in a later, already published, chapter. It changes some things...glad you remembered it! :)

Lavender is a horrible person, huh? Lol Don't worry, everyone hates her! Lol Well, she gets her cummupits! Lol (Eventually!)

I'm glad you liked it! I know there were some obvious hints, but they were pretty necessary. There will still be surprises, promise! :)

Thanks so much for the lovely reviews!


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