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Review:LittleMissLizPotter says:
Hi, this is Delia here with your requested review :)

So, I think you have a pretty good plot here. Arianthe is an interesting character, although, what happened to Lily? Shouldn't she be going into first year around this time also?

I think you've set up the characters and the story and plot lines well. There are some issues where you have some odd word choices. I'm sure that if you go back and look for them, you'll find them :)

Well, that's all for now. I'm going to read chapter 2 now :)

~Delia

Author's Response: Hi Delia!

If I told you what happened to Lily, I would be giving away spoilers. But I promise I didn't forget about her or anything :)

I'll look back and see the word choice. Thanks for the feedback :)


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