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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
This chapter certainly has an interesting beginning. I felt like I was on name overload toward the start of the chapter, though, and I still don't feel like I have all the names down straight. That was a bit confusing.

Also, your chapter was a little on the short side. Not much happened in the chapter, and I'm not exactly sure that it was compelling enough for me to read more.

However, I enjoyed Al's reaction to relying on Muggle transportation. It seemed spot on and very realistic. Additionally, Al's characterization was excellent, and the plot flowed very nicely.

Good job!

Author's Response: It's kind of a sequel to a sequel, so the characters were all introduced in another of my fics- I can see how it would get confusing though.
This chapter is just setting the scene, catching up with the characters etc. But again, I understand if you don't feel like reading anymore.
I'm glad you liked Allegra's characterisation. She's a favourite of mine to write, as is her mother :)

Thank you :) :)

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