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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Well, well, welcome back! I had noticed that this chapter took a minute to come up but I've been patient since I knew that you'd probably wanted to get it just right, everyone does that with a chapter like this one. And may I say that it was so emotional that I nearly burst into tears? The Memorial service was so wonderfully written and the details that you put into the other characters there was brilliant. It felt like something that I would be a part of, as if it were happening and that's very hard to do! I had thought that I would become nothing but a slobbering piece of unfeminine mush by the end of this and somehow, I survived. But not by much! I loved the surreal quality to the service and George's recollections of knowing that Fred was gone was very beautifully written. I always say that I should leave really long reviews for you but I never can, I don't know how everyone else does it! There aren't nearly enough words to describe how well done this is! Argh! Oh, and that little thing with Percy was very unexpected! Are you going to continue on with that or are you just going to leave it hanging between them? I haven't written anything quite like what you have here so bravo for being really brave! Such a touchy subject and not enough toilet paper to stop the tears! I'm rambling right? Okay. Uhm, glad to see Angelina again and her comforting him was too sweet and her support was very realistic and I hope that it continues in the next chapter with George. Though, he has some other things on his mind and I can't wait to see what you do next! Uhm...congrats on all of your nominations and I hope you win a few of those darn Dobby's, you deserve them! I'll be back whenever you update again!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Heyyy. Sorry for the inexcusably long time it's taken me to respond to this review.

Yes, the time between updates has been longer since I started back to school. My current update schedule goal is a chapter/month...

It's so wonderful to hear that you enjoyed the Memorial service even if it did render you an emotional mess. :P It sort of makes me happy to hear that! Not that you were upset, but that my writing evoked such emotions in you. As for the bit with Percy, I sort of invisioned it as something that's been eating him up and in the emotional stress of the memorial surface, it just sort of came out. I dont' think I'll be picking that back up, especially with the design of the timeline. The next George chapter takes place in july... so minor plot points are sometimes lost for the sake of the overall structure, if that makes sense.

Angelina is very very good for George, and it's about time he starts realizing that. ;)

thank you so much for your review and for all of your amazing support of this story. You are awesome-sauce.


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