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Review:Yoshi_Kitten says:
Well hello! So it took me a few days to get there, but I am finally here to start reviewing this story for you. Now, I'll be honest with ya, I usually shy away from anything that has the title: "Harry Potter and the ___" [fill in the blank]. So I was a bit skeptical of this at first. But after I read "Marked" and got a feel for your particular writing style, I simply could not resist checking this story out... And boy am I ever glad that I did!! =)

The prologue for this isn't really all that long, but yet you still managed to fit so much into it. I have so many questions about this already, which I am sure was your goal, lol. Like, how did Harry die? And if Ginny is there, then does that mean that she is dead too? And I wanna know how they died, and why they are at Kings Cross, and if they are going to get a chance to come back again... Yeah, like I said, SOO MANY questions, haha!! =P

I really liked reading Harry's inner thoughts in this, and I couldn't help but laugh out loud when he made the comment about being dead again, lol. I think you captured his character very well here, just as you have done with everyone else I've read so far! I mean, is there any HP character out there that you cannot write? Tehehee!! ;)

But anyways, this story is already showing so much promise, and I for one am super excited to see where it goes. I love the mystery you have set up here and I look forwards to reading more and seeing where this goes. :)

~Deana~

Author's Response: Hi!

I had a similar sort of thought way back when I was naming the story. To me, anything that starts with "Harry Potter and the_" sounds rather pretentious. I struggled with it a lot. In the end, I decided that it made for a good incentive. Because anything that carries that name needs to be very well done or it sounds, well, tacky.

Like you said, there isn't much to the prologue. It only serves to whet the reader's appetite and hopefully make them ask the sort of questions you're asking. So I guess I did a good job. ;)

I'll tell you one other thing about the prologue. It's actually the beginning of a chapter that comes much later in the story. Chapter 38, to be exact. So you will eventually find out what happens.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


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