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Review:AlAndAl says:
Ooooh! This was great! Your characterization of Fred and how he was forced to fill the shoes of Twin Fred is really different. I have actually never seen Fred like this and it actually makes a lot of sense! George replacing his twin through his son, it's a brilliant idea.
The flow of the story was good. And the mood was very...misty. Like it was all clouded over and he didn't really belong anywhere. He was lost in himself.
I'm not really sure if I have any criticisms for you. It is a solid piece of work that made me really feel hownlost Fred really is. Good job!

Author's Response: Hello!

Thanks very much for the review, I'm so flattered!

I was worried about that mistiness, though i didnt have a name for it, but i feel better about it! i didnt know who fred really was so it wasnt like he could know himself!

Thanks again!

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