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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Tag!

This is a really sweet oneshot. Most everyone can relate to the feelings that Hermione has, and I think you've done very good characterisation in that Hermione is just resigned to it rather than having hissy fits and storming around like some girls would :)

I think there are some misplaced commas and other grammar issues you have here, nothing major, just things that could be easily fixed :) Other than that, great job!

Author's Response: Hey!
Yeah,I never wanted her to come off as horrible and selfish. I think she would have just stewed in her own thoughts.

Yeah, I used to have a major problem with the comma. That one shot was the first piece I did on here that actually included them properly. The older story I did had about 2 in total.
Thank you!

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