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Review:Ginny45 says:
The first paragraph is lovely. The image that is provides is amazing and every reader understands how annoying a ticking clock can be. With founders I think it is quite important to give the reader something small to start the connection. So excellently done.

You showed the personal struggle she is having really well. Torn between two people is such a popular plot but I really love the way you have done it.

The little bits of description you give make sure the reader still has an idea of where they are. Like her winter boots sinking into the snow. It is so simple, yet it conjures an an entire image into my head.


Author's Response: Hello!

Thank you so much for reviewing. I’m glad you thought the first paragraph was lovely as I had no idea how to begin seeing I never wrote a story based in the founder era before so I needed something I could connect with before getting into it. It’s nice the same apparently goes for the readers.

Thank you! I hope you enjoyed it and once again thanks for the review!

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