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Review:Cleopatraa says:
I really liked your banner. It’s really pretty and your summary intrigued me I wanted to see if I could guess who it was. At the moment for some reason my first guess is Pansy Parkinson and after some thinking I think it could also be Astoria Greengrass ( without having read the story yet).

With reading your story I think my first guess was right. It was Pansy. So yeah for me. I though this was really well written. The imagery, the descriptions and her personality especially. You really made a strong character of her, which some people don’t do. I’m glad to not see her as the snivelling girlfriend of Draco but a strong and perhaps not very likeable pureblood girl. It’s nice to see her reaction to Draco’s mission and I have to admit you have a rather unique (than most) and very realistic approach to it. The only regret I would have if this piece would have been longer is that you only see the negative side of her. If it were longer you should have made her more complex but for this size it’s ( her character) good.

Author's Response: Hi thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! Yeah you guessed it right, it's Pansy :)

I am glad you found her a strong character, and that you think my approach was unique and realistic.

Well, yeah if it were longer, I probably would have shown the other nicer side of her, but since this was it, I think it worked.

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing once again!

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