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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Wow! I really enjoyed reading this one shot. I have read a few things on your page now, and I can really see your improvement as a writer (especially in this piece). I loved your play on metaphors in the beginning! Clever writing always makes me smile. I thought that this was a great, well drown out portrayal of Peter and his crush on lily and of the silly sort of things young people do when they try to get somebody to like them... of course it always ends up badly.

I think my favorite line is the last one... about the frog becoming the rat. gah. all in all this was a great one shot!! Keep up the good work. :)

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