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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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So I saw this story get some Dobby nominations (congrats by the way) so I had to check it out.

I have to say that this story was very well done. It was a difficult subject matter, but Astoria's emotions and inner conflict at being abused but still wanting to believe that her father still had good in him was very effective. It was also good to see how Astoria can be something of a redemdtive influence for Draco.

The song lyrics seemed to be perfectly integrated into the story, and it overall it seemed to flow very well.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for checking this out, as well as the congratulations! I loved giving Draco the rule of the savior, and though it was far from Astoria's fault she was broken, she *was* broken.

Thank you so much for this wonderful review!! ♥

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