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Review:Jchrissy says:
Ah!! This was such a cliffy!! But really, you are doing such an amazing job weaving in so many believable emotions into this. Can you blame Rose for leaving him, he was acting completely out of hand.

I was really surprised to see Brooks there, but I loved the sense of urgency you filled that section with. As well as Hugo's reaction. And Hugo! I've never read him portrayed as gay before, and I have to say it's a nice change.

I liked the way that he was so open with Rose, and I really like family scenes you're showing us, it's so fun to see such different portrayals of them all.

And now! Why won't Krum talk to anyone but Rose? How is he possibly going to get out of this? i know what he's doing is wrong, but I still feel bad for him.

Wonderful chapter, darling! Your writing style is positively intoxicating! Your amount of detail twisted in with the constant moving forward of the plot, the way you keep the pace even but still make things feel so intense, it's amazing!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! You reviews never fail to make me feel all sorts of wonderful. I'm so glad you've liked the scenes with Rose's family. I haven't given her a lot of friends in this story because I do want there to be some parallels between her loneliness and Krum's, but she's not a hermit. And Hugo just felt like a great way to emphasize the "enjoy love and life" attitude Rose seems to be missing.

I'm so glad you said the pacing feels okay. I worry sometimes that I'm dragging it out but I really want the payoff of *finally* bringing Rose and Krum together.

Thank you again for another wonderful review!


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