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Review:Serendipitous_love says:
Itís good to see the marauders done well! I love them. Yes, theyíre not too jokey right now but it shows that they do have serious sides, a truth not many seem to realise. The whole scene works well because it just fits! Iíd entirely expect this to happen. Itís well written too- the scenery is described perfectly so I might aswell be at the table too.

I like how you didnít make Sirius as suave as most do. How he relies only on his looks is a new concept and I quite like it. It makes him awkward and cute.

The whole idea you do need to be careful with- it can be clichť. I donít think it is yet, I think itís early days and does look promising. Yet, you have to think of movies like Bodyguard. Maia is pretty funny too, very stubborn and determined, I like! The whole piece is really good and full of promise. I like how the friends are, how itís written and everything. Keep it going!

Author's Response: Yeah, it's set when they're about 20 so the wars almost climaxing and it's hard for them to joke around as much as they used to. In saying that, there will be fragments of their humour flying around here and there :)

I'm also so used to Sirius having the "sex god" persona that I thought that there should be much more to the lost Black boy. He should be mysterious and reserved.

Yeah, I'm aware that this has a great potential of being a cliche. It might appear even more so at the end of the next chapter, but I can assure you (and all the other readers) that it is not! Expect the unexpected ;)

Hehe, thank you SO much for reviewing! I really appreciate you taking the time to write one!

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