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Review:Moondanser83 says:
Wow.

The flow of this story is beautiful, the anxiety tangible.

I had to keep slowing myself down, and making myself focus on the sentence I was reading because I wanted to jump ahead... I was dying to know what was going on!

So here we have Rose and Scorpius in the same common room... I'm going to take a leap here and say that Scorpius was sorted into Gryffindor... A concept that absolutely LOVE!

I was surprised what I got near that end, I wasn't expecting that twist... or the ending for that matter.

So sad. :(

You did an excellent job here and I look forward to reading more of your work!

~Moon~

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)

I'm really glad that you liked this - it makes the effort of writing worth it when readers and reviewers like the story!

Haha, I've had several people tell me that! They had to make themselves slow down - I'd say that makes me very happy as a writer!

You know, I honestly never thought of that! It was kind of an unconscious decision, you know? But it seems like it was a good decision!

I've got this thing for leaving the reader utterly confused or speechless or whatever because I like that jaw-drop ending!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed and I very much appreciate your review! :)


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