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Review:XxImAgInAiReXx says:
Well, at first I thought this would be a Dennis/OC, but I'm really glad it wasn't! It was so sweet, how they just became friends instead of the whole cliched 'my-wife-left-me-because-I'm-magic-and-now-I'm-running-to-you-hey-let's-have-a-romantic-relationship-since-clearly-we-belong-together' thing.

And cliches are cool. It's just a nice change to see something that isn't.

I loved how Lyra just coolly turned Leo away, like, 'Hey, you messed up my life! I am not falling for you again, no way!' instead of the 'Well you really screwed me up but I think I might be falling for you and then there's this guy who I eventually end up with and you fall off the map, leaving a big plot-hole' scenario.

Also, just gotta say, I love Ben and Timothy. They are adorable!

In short, this story is awesome. A devaition from the norm, and a surprisingly pleasant read. You made your characters believable and the scenes you put them in plausable. It's pretty awesome.

~Elle

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm pretty worried about this story, because I had so many different directions I wanted to pull it in and the result is rather long-winded and choppy (in my opinion). I am glad to see you enjoyed it, it makes me feel a bit better. And Timothy and Ben... They were characters who weren't really necessary to bring in, but I just had to write them, they were so adorable in my head (this is why the story is so rambling...)

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