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Review:True Author says:
Hello! It's True Author with your requested review! =]
I must say this was a nice first chapter. You showed the "first day of school" tension well and I did understand Blanca's feelings. I think you like Blanca a lot because you wrote about her feelings perfectly!
First of all, you asked me about the plot, so let me clear that I review just one chapter for one request and you have to re request if u want me to review next chapters too! As this is an introductory chapter, I couldn't understand the plot much.
Yes, your story is readable! But I think you should make your chapter more interesting.
The song by the hat was quite nice!
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Author's Response: thanks for the review, i'm glad that you like the first chapter. i'll post a re-review soon :)

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