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Review:AlAndAl says:
I decided to get on this review before everyone else submitted, so it wouldn't be rushed. I'm happy to see that my challenge pushed you to write this. That's why I made the challenge, so spark some inspiration and I'm glad I succeeded.
You are very good at descriptions and portraying emotions through words. I could feel Albus' hurt flood off the screen. I actually wrote a similar story about Albus being betrayed by James. The emotions at play were quite different and it's refreshing to see new characterizations of characters, especially next generation, because you have so much choice over their character.
It was very intense and I think you delved deep into Albus' hurt and pain.
Very good job and good luck :)
-Allie

Author's Response: It really did, I had been thinking about it for ages and now I'm so glad that I wrote it. Thank you so much, Oh wow did you? I would be quite interested to read that if you have it up?
Once again thank you so much for the review and letting me take part in your challenge :-D


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