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Review:Jess the Enthusiast says:
AHHH THAT WAS CRAZY!!! Poor Fauna :/ You know, I was really feeling sorry for Scorpius the first half of the chapter (in addition to breaking his face and spirit, they broke his glasses. His /glasses/. Seriously, broken glasses just make me want to cry...I think it's because of an episode of The Twilight Zone) but then he was a jerk at the end. I mean, I get why he lashed out but he really shouldn't have - same goes for Flora. I think it did indeed escalate quickly AND POOR FAUNA. I wanna give her a hug :(
Okay, so what would my reviews be if I didn't gush over Albus? THAT WAS THE CUTEST SCENE JKLSKJDASFBHFBDJF i love them. Especially when they have awkward snogs in the Restricted Section :D
So I absolutely loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next update!


~Jess :D

Author's Response: AAAH CAPSLOCK HI JESS. poor /everyone/ - I do have a thing for making my characters' lives worse by an increment of approximately 20% each chapter.

they broke his glasses, they broke his /soul/.

this fic in general escalates quickly. guys probably have no idea what's coming between now and the end. but things escalating quickly is a good phrase to bear in mind. cough.

(I've stopped shipping Albus/Flora - I basically ship Albus/Jess now)

thank you for the review! :D ♥

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