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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Heyyy!! Here I am at last, as promised. Took me long enough, right? I totally blame vet school. -_- Anyway, I digress. This was a fabulous chapter... lots of feels and lots of funny. There were so many things that I want to comment on, but literally I'd end up copying and pasting most of the chapter. lol. Just to name a few of your brilliant one-liners that made me chuckle out loud:

[i]charging up static electricity to unleash on unsuspecting nappers...

He wasn't aware that staircases even had relatives...[/i]

...and...

[i]Brewing was a piece of cake, and baking was the same thing but with literal cake[/i]

lololol. So funny. I'm always a tinge jealous at the how easy these jokes fit into the narrative of your story. It's a very cracky, but educated sort of humour that I enjoy very much. Oh, I also adored that the lizard said "meep" not sure why, but that made me chuckle.

AND ERMEHGERD. SMARMY SCORP IS SUCH A BABE -- BAKING WITH SUCH EASE, APOLOGIZING, INVADING HER PERSONAL SPACE, SMILING, BREATHING!!! HOW CAN ONE SO SMARMY BE SO FLUFFY. NOT FAIR.

Anyway, I smell redemption in the air and I hope nothing bad happens to scorpius in the next few chapters. I don't thing galliance is a normal characteristic for him, so he probably isn't very good at it.

anyway, great chapter!

Author's Response: Melll :3 I put off responding to this until I could finally get to editing Capers and now I am SO HIII.

Hee, my random crack needs a home and Capers shall give one to them. I remember describing that lizard as something else, but then I was like, what if it said meep. Lizards don't say meep, but let's make it say meep and SO IT STAYED~

BREATHING!!! YES HE'S QUITE ALIVE AND CHARMING THE AIR UP, NO? :3 lolol he probably is very terrible at galliance, to be sure, poor boy. he only knows how to shove cupcakes at people, but that's alll right.

♥ ♥


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