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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Another great chapter, Rachel!! I'm going to apologize now for the brevity of my review, but life is crazy and my to do list is eons long, but I wanted to be sure to let you know I read this chapter and enjoyed it immensely!!

Your characterization of Hermione was tops. I loved her relating her own surroundings to the settings of novels she's read before. Very nicely done. Also, it was great to see the cast of characters keeping her company in her imprisonment!! I adore Dean Thomas and am anxious to see him more as the story progresses. I also hope that Oliver gets a grip on himself and stops being so pessimistic (or realistic)... either way, it won't do them any good.

While I'm talking about characters... boy or boy did you do a great job with Bellatrix!!she's a touch character to even think about getting inside her head, but you did phenominally well. Writing a bellatrix and voldemort scene was quite the bold move!! You pulled it off spectacularly well.

Great chapter (I've still no theories on the blood droplets) and I can't wait for the next one!!

Author's Response: Mel! ♥ Oh my gosh, it's so, so fantastic to see you back here again. :) And no need for apologies, of course -- I completely understand the burdens of a long to-do list. I'm just really pleased you're still reading (and enjoying) this story at all!

Hermione's a sometimes tricky character for me to write, although I'm not sure why, because I find Harry and Ron pretty easy -- maybe it's because I identify a lot with her. Who knows? But regardless, it makes me really happy to hear you think I've got her accurately. :) And Bellatrix!! I was SO scared of writing her here -- thank you so much. You're so tops. ♥

No theories is an okay thing to have. :3 All will be revealed in due time, after all! Thank you to the moon and back for this review, Mel. Honestly... I really can't tell you. And I can't wait to see you back for the next update!

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