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Review:potterfan310 says:
I found this story because I saw you wanted a banner on TDA. I'm a big fan of next gen and I love James Sirius/OC's and also teen pregnancy stories. (I'm strange I know :D)

I love how we don't find out who the father is until the end of the 2nd chapter. You leave us guessing and it also make me want to read on.

I like the plot and how you've charaterisated each of them. Violet seems awesome, as do Lily and Rose. It'll be intresting to see how she tells them (if she does tell them), the father and the Potter-Weasley clan.


One thing, there seemed to be large gaps between each paragraph of text. I'm not sure wether it's meant to be like that or it's just a layout problem.

Deffinatly adding it to my favourites and am looking forward to the next chapter.
-Potterfan310
Sophie xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!

My favourite fanfics are either Next Gen, James Sirius/OC and teen pregnancy stories too! (As you can see from all my favourite stories :) I guess we're both strange like that :D) I totally love your Lily Potter story!

I know what you mean about the huge spaces between each paragraph, I've noticed too and tried to fix it manually, but as soon as I save it, the spaces come back exactly the same, or even sometimes bigger! I'm really sorry about that, I know it gets really annoying having to scroll so much.

Thanks again for your review :)
~yerawizard27
Rachel xo

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