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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Tag!

I feel a little ashamed that I've never read any of your fics before -- you're kind of famous on HPFF xD Most of your fics have won some awards. And rightly so!

This is a hugely effective opening chapter. Through the style of your prose you effortlessly illustrate Lily's character, and the setting is a great extension of that.

I've always been intrigued by time travel stories, though I've never read one that seemed to really pull it off. I wonder what will happen next! Will Lily's foot be healed? Where/when will she go? Who will she meet, and what will she effect? It's all very interesting!

Great job! :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this story! Usually people only do shorter stories for the tag, so it was a great surprise to see you'd reviewed this one - it's my favourite story of the ones I've written, which makes any feedback more worthwhile. ^_^

Don't be ashamed! There are too many authors to keep up with - I just have the benefit of having been here longer than most. "Famous" is quite a word to hear, though - definitely an ego boost. :D

I'm glad that you've liked the first chapter! Time travel is tricky to make work, but I can assure you that it plays a rather different role in this story. ;) Enjoy the rest!

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