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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello! I really liked this chapter! I've never read anything with Lucy/Scorpius, so this is a really unique story so far! Also, I love the dynamics between Lucy and the other healers that work with her. It feels really natural, and I can definitely picture all of this happening, especially in St. Mungo's! Are we going to get some background on Lucy and Scorpius's relationship? Because she blushes so much, that makes me think something has happened between them before. Also, descriptions of what the other characters look like would be nice, unless you want to leave it up to the reader to imagine what they think the characters would be like. The only grammar thing I noticed was when someone says something and you don't have "he said" or "she said" after it, you can put a period instead of a comma.
"Go back to the chicken lady Lucy Weasel," can be "Lucy Weasel." unless you want to put he said or Adam said after the comma.
Overall, this was a really interesting chapter, and I think this story is going to be really unique and fun to read! 9/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hi Cassie, I love how you review everything I write, it's awesome :D Natural was the feel I was going for and most of the dialogue in this is going to be staffroom talk. Yep, obviously, just wait until the next chapter ;) I can tell you're definitely not British, because we say full stops not periods, muahahaha! Unique's what I aim to do, though with thousands of other fics, it's very hard :D Thanks for the review Cassie x

Didya know I have an MTA now? Exciting!

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