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Review:Calypso_conceals says:

I really love your story, it's really well written. However, there are a couple of things I don't quite understand. In chapter 2 you say that Del is an amazing chaser, but in this chapter she says she doesn't play quidich and is a strategist, she also doesn't have good reflexes which a chaser would have. Also, in chapter 1 it says that Aiden is Del's cousin, so surely he would recognise her? Just a few thoughts. Otherwise I think it's really good. :)

Author's Response: First off, thanks for the review. Secondly, I am in the process of completely re editing this. I'm not too concerned about things not adding up right now, because I know they won't, especially with the Quidditch, which I changed. It'll hopefully be done as soon as possible, and then I can come back and clean any mistakes I made up. But thanks for pointing that out :)

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