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Review:AlAndAl says:
Finished all 14 chapters in a day. I just layed around reading, because it's an addicting story!
Blanca is well characterized. You've avoided making her a Mary-Sue which is always a challenge, because making the perfect character often times literally making that person perfect. By adding her bratiness and the way she overreacts to certain situation gives her good flaws which make her more human and therefore more relatable.
So far, the flow of the story is excellent. I've found with a lot of these "I HATE HIM/HER!!" stories, they have their kiss or moment of whatever and then suddenly everything changes and it's no longer about the rivalry. This story is taking a new look on how complicated these relationships can be and aren't making a fairy tale wonderland out of the Blanca/James hate-lationship. The pace is excellent.
There's no horrible spelling errors are grammar fouls that I noticed. I am not a huge grammar-Nazi anyway.
I will definitely be keeping an eye on this story for future updates. It's too addicting to forget about!
I hope this review illuminated aspects of your story and update soon!
-Allie

Author's Response: thankyou so much for the review! i really appreciate it, i like that you like the story and i have a new chapter in the queue, i just hope it gets validated soon enough. please continue reading, the review was really helpful

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