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Review:padmoonyfoot7 says:
Really good! Oh Richie's back! I have to say that I'm kinda happy about this, and I don't know why. I think it's because it makesthe whole who-she-loves thing even more complicated.
I really like Theo. And really trust him.
Tracey is nice, but there's something creepy about her. For a while I thought there was something going on with Roxy, because Theo said that she didn't want to go with him, but then when the Lily thing surfaced everything seemed to chang slightly.

I don't know if I think it's Lily. Because if Theo is trustworthy (pressumably he is) then he wouldn't have saved her, she would just become a danger to them if she is the spy.
I still have to say that I am honestly not sure who it is, and in other stories, that would be ob-vious by now. I like that there's still that constant mystery in the story as other thing begin to unfold.

Hey! If the traitor is already ob-vious and I am just to dim to realise who it is yet, give me time and I will figure out eventually. ;)

I am so happy that some of the gang got back together, even if it was only for a short time. Hopefully they'll all be back together soon.

Gonna go read chapters ten and twelve and see what you've edited.

Keep up the amazing work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!! ;P

Author's Response: YAY RICHIE IS BACK *evil eevviill laugh*
And good, Theo is awesome. You should probably definitely check out 'Her Hero' too :P

Tracey was just a device to help ScoRose out- she's nice, don't worry!-, and you'll have to find out with Lily in the next chapter :P

I think that the traitor was obvious, but now I've tried to cloudy the water some. Hopefully I'll give you some more possibilities soon :D

Thanks so much for the review! xD

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