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Review:Calypso says:
Yay- Narcissa chapter!
I really like your characterisation of her too. It's quite different to how I've imagined and read her before but it seems to work! I like her perception of herself as a guide for her sisters a lot. It's really original.

One of my favourite parts was Narcissa circling the floor, daydreaming about Lucius. It was a really lovely and effective way of telling the reader something of her character, and the way you ended it with "Andromeda shows up on the thirteenth" worked really well too.
I also enjoyed "the resigned quirk to her mouth" and "transitions from unreasonably angry to unreasonably depressed," but I think that should be "makes the transition" rather than "transitions"?

I love the interactions between the sisters- they're all such interesting people! Hehe :)
And I did NOT see Lucius being interested in Andromeda coming. But it's a really intriguing idea... Looking forward to seeing how it turns out!

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing Narcissa - her character is just so amusing. I'm so happy you think I made her original, too :D

Hehehe I like that part too. I can relate to her unrealistic fantasies, I guess (; Oh, I think transitions works...? It's just a shorter way of saying "makes the transition". I'll check the dictionary to be sure, though. Thanks!

So happy that you this enough to review :D Thank you very much!


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