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Review:The Last Marauder says:
Now the only question in my head, is who is the mother from the market again? Was she the woman who insulted Remus when he was kid? The one his dad had the argument with? I can't remember!

Anyway, this was a really good chapter. I liked how you captured the sort of cabin fever between the pair of them when they were locked up in the house together. That always happens, even among the best of friends, but it's just as a case of both being frustrated and having no way to vent that frustration, so they vent it at eachother. But as Remus said, it wasn't really fighting and it doesn't change how they feel about eachother.

I liked that Kingsley offered to be their secret keeper, just because it was such a great gesture of friendship, you know? But selfless Remus, like always, doesn't want a friend to be in harm's way.

I also liked how they are both getting excited about the arrival of Ted, and how they can now physically see proof that he is on the way - that was just so nice.

The song lyrics - did you make them up or are they from something? I thought they were nice anyway, and very fitting!

I don't know what else to say, except well done on another great chapter, I can't wait for more, so please do update soon! :-)

Author's Response: thank you so much, and so i'm glad you liked the chapter, and of course thanks so much for reviewing :) and so you know, i've updated "rampant magic" too (finally)

but yeah, the mother from the market was the one who insulted remus and tonks in the marketplace, she had the two children, and she was disgusted with remus for being a werewolf and with tonks for having married him. i haven't given her a name (yet) so that made it kind of difficult to really identify her as anything but the mother from the market.

and yeah i made up those lyrics, just because i didn't want to steal from a "Muggle" song since these are wizards. i thought the lyrics were a bit corny, but i'm glad you liked them. and they need a bit of corny in this complicated and horrible war. :)

and yes, i will definitely keep my eye out for an update of "door into the dark"! and wow, five years! can't believe it, and oh do i remember the site crash of 2008 lol. but yeah, so awesome to have been keeping it up that long. :D

thanks again for the awesome review :)


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