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Review:sour_grapes_snape says:
Dan = loser
Aimee = stupid
James = amusing and not as much of a huge jerk

I feel really bad for Aimee right now. Dan should just crawl in a hole and die. I would have punched him. I'm a bit violent like that. Jerks should be punched.

I went back and reread the flashbacks about Dan and I just find myself liking him less and less. Even during the "good" parts of their relationship, it still seemed bad. Off. Just... not good. Blah.

Crazy stuff is going to go down next chapter, isn't it? James being sort of nice? The two of them drinking together? Oh yeah. Stuff is going to happen.

Be afraid.

Be very afraid.

-Laura

Author's Response: well, seems fair enough.
well, she does love him.
and yes, that one seems about right.

dan was really mean to her while they were together, and now he's being difficult with her now they're not together... it's all a bit of a mess for poor aimee. feel free to punch him.

yeah, i wrote those flashbacks knowing what dan was really like. quite sexist and he did treat aimee like a slave, but he loved her at the same time. it was all very confusing. he expected her to do what he said but he never did what she said, you know.

the next chapter and the one after that are all very dan/aimee/james, but hey, it will all have to go somewhere... eventually. i know whats happening at the end.

i am afraid.

very afraid...

ellie :) xx


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