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Review:Jchrissy says:
This was a really emotional one shot. It's sad to think about Alice's mentality being so unable even before she was tortured, and it made me curious as to how she managed to become such a wonderful Auror with how dramatic these night terrors seemed.

I liked the idea of Frank not knowing a ton about Alice at this point, it makes it fun to wonder how they ended up together.

I think you did a good job with Lily, giving her the caring need to help her friend. She did seem a bit open with Frank about it, and it seems odd because I'm sure it's not something Alice wants everyone to know, but I guess she figured he could be necessary to get Alice back to her dorm.

I really liked the emotion you put into this, at really created a strong tension that made me want to just help poor Alice.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really loved writing this because Alice/Frank wasn't something I'd ever written before, and I thought that maybe there was something stronger than just boy-meets-girl-and-falls-in-love bringing them together.

So, for Lily being open about it... first off, I think night terrors needed to be explained at that point, since not a lot of people know what they are. Also, I think Lily just wanted Frank to know that Alice didn't have any control over them, they were just something that happened and she wasn't crazy.

Thank you for reviewing :)


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