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Review:SilentConfession says:
Hey Maybe!

I'm here to thank you for your work in the house cup and for being such a star in the podcast reviews! I know this is ubber late, but better now then never :D This is also my 200th review!! yah!

This is a really great beginning! I loved the simplicity of some of the narrative and yet you get the angst and the confusion across so well. I like how you slowly build up to him wondering what's the point of hanging on anymore and how he's so close to just stepping over the line to madness.

That does make me wonder what happened to his family and why Lysander and his parents have complete forsaken him. Four months really isn't that long so it makes me wonder what happened within those four months that drove them away. Was it his insistence that she was real? Or was it something else?

I like that your exploring mental instabilities (or is it?) and you seem to be doing a really great job of it. I've heard of this particular one before I think, or at least, heard of something where people think that there are demons or a whole different world out of the periphery of our eyes. So i think this is going to be a really interesting read for sure! I'm really hoping that she's real because i think that would add such a weird and dark aspect to this story and i'm looking forward to where you're taking this ;D

Great job Maybe with this piece and i think you've done an excellent job with the prologue! I've always been wary of them because they can just be extraneous information the author puts in but i think that this really sets the stage for later on.

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