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Review:AdeleShare says:
Hi, AdeleShare here with your requested review!

So to start off, I'll say I'm not a big Lucius and Narcissa fan.
Just because, well they're bad guys lol. But I did enjoy this one-shot :D you showed a different side of Narcissa than that which we see I'm the books, and one I'm not sure I'd have gleaned from her. I guess at some point these two were just young and in love like so many others. I always thought that maybe they'd only married because of their bloodlines. I likes how the story was written as well. You conveyed a lot of emotion into Narcissa, that again, I wouldn't have guessed she was capable of. Lucius seemed more to character when he was angry with her and ignoring her. That just seems like a Malfoy thing to do. But I also liked how near the end, it shows us that even crusty old Lucius had human emotions as well. I think you did well engaging the readers feelings, and you've even made a Lucius/Narcissa sympathizer out of me a little :D

Again, I am new to this so I hope this is what you were looking for.

~AdeleShare

Author's Response: Hey. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed this one shot even though you're not a Lucius and Narcissa fan!
I am glad that you gave this so much thought, and that you liked my writing and emotions I brought into it.
Thank you so much for your sweet review once again!


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