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Review:daretodream says:
Oohhh, INTERESTING.

I have to admit, it did take me a moment to get reoriented with this! (It probably didn't help that I took a brief break between chapters)

I'm really REALLY intrigued by what you have going on here, that's for sure. A story within a story...based on the lives of the characters in that story. It's certainly different, and in a good way!

I think that what I like the most about this is that you aren't just abandoning the characters you created in the first chapter, or even their storyline. It's more like you're...modifying them? They may not be exactly the same, but they have a counterpart, one who is, at the very least, similar. To me, it makes it a lot more believable, the story within the story.

So, yeah, obviously I like your new characters too. They each seem unique and interesting! Especially the concept that Scorpius has a twin! The few times I've seen it happen, he had a female twin so she could date one of the Potter boys. I much prefer your version :D

I think you have a lot of really unique and interesting concepts going on within this story, so really good job!

Keep up the good work!

~Cassie

Author's Response: Hello! I really do believe that I'm to blame for your mild disorientation considering that there was hardly anything hinting towards such a change -which greatly worried me. I'm very glad to hear that you find it intriguing though!

And yes, 'modifying' is the perfect word. I know that Valeria seems to be doing this for no reason now but that is bound to change.

I'm also incredibly happy to hear that you like the concept of Alphard because I admire him -this has a lot to do with the people he's based upon.

Thank you so much for this helpful and encouraging review and I'm sorry for taking such a long time to respond to it.

-Manno



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