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Review:daretodream says:
Hello!

Ohh, I'm intrigued. I really like older, more historical stories like this one!

I have to admit, I'm a bit relieved that your story is actually about the Peverell family and not just random OC's. I usually enjoy at least a small connection to canon.

I liked your characterization of all of the characters, but I especially liked Anastasia. I always have a soft spot for young female characters, and I feel so bad that she is sick. It actually makes me like her more, she's flawed, though not necessarily by any fault of her own.

I think you did a really good job with the dialogue in this story. You somehow managed to make the formality seem familiar, and at times, through the dialogue alone, I was reminded that Ignotus is really nothing more than a child.

I definitely didn't lose interest at any point in this chapter, though I must admit that my interest was most piqued with Anastasia. I desperately wanted to know what was going on with her, and now I know that Ignotus does as well!

Really good job on the first chapter, can't wait to move on :D

~Cassie

Author's Response: Oh, hello! Thanks for this lovely review; it really does encourage me to work harder on this story.

I, too, have a soft spot for young females character and Anastasia is, by far, the most interesting and the most heartbreaking I've written about.

I'm happy to hear that you think that this chapter was nice and interesting! Thanks again for the review!

-Manno


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